牛剑G5偏爱的文书都写了什么？真的只是学术吗？

A particularly inspiring talk by XXX that I had attended during the XXX Young Leaders Summit taught me about “blue oceans”, which are essentially (...) Recently, I participated in the XXX business plan competition where I put this knowledge to good use. The competition required me to (...) I incorporated these ideas into my proposal for an online service exchange platform; instead of conventional e-commerce websites that sell goods, my company would (...). 

文书点评

A同学文书的主线是自己参加一个青年高峰论坛的时候，听了一个著名管理学家的演讲，随即对“蓝海”这个商业概念发生浓厚的兴趣。之后通过阅读相关书籍、写商业计划书、活学活用多领域的知识，最终搭建线上网络商业平台。和大家想象中的“学术学术学术”不同，A同学在自己的文书里写了一个完整的故事。这个故事有血有肉，很真实，也很可信。

文书点评

B的侧重点更多放在经济和金融上面。他的文书故事也有一个完整的情节：对一个小现象发生兴趣，然后深入钻研，参加论文比赛获奖并在学术期刊发表之后，进而在本国最大的报纸上发表文章向大众普及自己的观点。

I actively seek to find opportunities to challenge myself so as to improve upon the skills learnt.  I led a team of four in the XXX Short Film Competition,  (...)During the month of preparation, I learnt to contextualise economic theories using real-world examples. My knowledge was no longer restricted to the theoretical analysis in textbooks but (...) Developing my research and analytical skills, this competition prepared me for both group work and independent study (...)

文书点评

C同学的侧重点和B同学一样，都是放在经济和金融上面。但是C同学提到金融和银行业，是由于这些知识并不在国际学校经济学的范围内，而详细介绍了自己如何去了解和向大众普及这些观点。这也就告诉我们，其实并不是像大家所说的申请英国的文书全部都是“学术学术学术”。从三位同学的成功文书来看，申请材料的侧重点不同，所参加的活动也有不同。就像A同学，非常明显是以管理/商科为主。而B和C同学的侧重点更多放在经济和金融上面。这也就告诉我们，其实并不是像大家所说的，申请英国的文书全部都是“学术学术学术”。