同学们应该都知道在托福写作中,一个好的开头往往能够给考官留下深刻的印象,但是怎么写托福写作开头呢?以下这些给大家分享的写作方法,想拿写作高分的同学必看。
对主题的概括陈述
第一句话不需要陈述观点,因为会在之后的论点中提到,同时也不要太深奥,只要简单的介绍一下主题就可以了。
例如:Some people think that texting on mobile phones is a useful and convenient way to communicate. Other people say that texting has caused people to become lazy. Which view do you agree with?题目是关于手机和短信的,所以第一句话只要说一些关于手机和电话的事情就行了。
Example of Sentence 1: Mobile phones have undeniably changed the way we communicate.
这里要提醒大家,在写作中,能不用人称就不要用,保持常规的措辞,可以把题目作为句子的主题。
话题引入
开头段第2个话很关键,需要引入相关的话题,为后面的观点做铺垫。即使是像“Mobile phones have undeniably changed the way we communicate”这样既宽泛又显然的陈述,也必须要有话题的引入。
因为考官会问你:“你凭什么这么说?你的理由呢!”
所以第二句话必须回答为什么。
Mobile phones have undeniably changed the way we communicate.
Example of Sentence 2: In addition to making phone calls, we can now send and receive text messages no matter where we are in the world, whether on the bus to work or on vacation across the country.
论点
这是全文非常重要的一句话,需要亮出观点,明确自己的立场并在后文加以论证,之前的每一句话都是为了这句话作铺垫的。
Example of Sentence 3 (version 1): While some may argue that texting pictures and abbreviations has made us lazy, I believe that texting is a useful and convenient way to communicate for several reasons.
Alternate example of Sentence 3: However, I believe that texting is a useful and convenient way to communicate for several reasons.
1. 统计数字来引出话题,把问题呈现在读者面前;
2. 用争议性的问题,激发读者兴趣;
3. 以新颖的观点,吸引读者注意力;
4. 学会呈现正反方的观点;
5. 引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头;
6. 对将要讨论的话题进行定义。
其次,要善于运用复合句,从而使引言段简洁明了,开宗明义。下面我们将探讨雅思与新托福各种题材和体裁文章引言段的写作方法。 引用数据呈现讨论的话题,说明问题的严重性或者重要性,引起读者的关注。下面我们结合几道雅思和新托福作文话题进行实战演练。
我们在写关于体罚的话题文章时,可以这样开头
It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father" Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue
而我们在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:
A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.
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