雅思写作的开头是考官对你文章的印象,一个好的开头对雅思写作小分达标至关重要。所以本文就来给大家介绍一下雅思写作开头怎么写,一起分析下常见的开头错误与改进方法,早早与雅思说分手。
雅思考试写作考试总共用时60分钟,包含两篇作文的写作要求,考生需完成这两篇作文。可以用20分钟写作文一、40分钟写作文二。作文二比作文一的分数所占的比例要高,因此考生应留有充足的时间完成作文二。
作文一:写作图表作文
150 字, 考试时间20分钟
A.柱形图 (Bar Chart)
B.饼图 (Pie Chart)
C.线形图(Curve Chart)
D.表格(Table)
E流程图(Flow Chart)
F地图(map)
作文二:写作议论文
250 字, 考试时间40分钟
A. Opinion Essay
B. Discussion Essay
C. Problem and Solution Essay
D. Two Part Essay
01
避开无效表达
Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
典型错误:This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the Internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play Internet games. So we can see the Internet is more and more important in our daily life.Topic 3-The importance of environmental protectionOh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!。
02
当心中式英文白送分
典型错误:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your lifeIn our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……Topic 2- The population problemThe population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.Topic 3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice personBeing a nice person have many advantages. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
03
避免观点模糊态度暧昧
典型错误: Topic -Should college students be allowed to get married?I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
04
切忌偏离主题无轨电车
典型错误:Topic -It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
05
不要过分简单没有重点
典型错误:Topic-The importance of environmental protectionThis issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
看完雅思写作开头怎么写,我们再来补充一些实用写作技巧。
1. 举例论证不推荐出现个人的,或者个别国家的例子,例如某某明显怎么怎么样,或者我的朋友怎么这么样,因为这些个例不具有典型性和代表性。 不妨将他们列为一类人 (some celebrities with bad habits),或者一类国家(some developing countries)。
2. 因果论证要注意衔接词除了常用的“because, so” 还要学会使用 “attribute to, consequently, result from” 等以增添语法、用词的丰富度。
3. 对比论证是无话可写时的救命手段,结合具体题目可以写有和无的对比,或者是过去与现在的对比。
4. 假设论证及对比论证使用时要注意虚拟语气的时态的正确使用。
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