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在托福独立写作中，开头段是非常重要的，因为开头段决定这部分的分数走向，很多同学在写开头段经常会出现词不答意、偏题的情况。下面来给大家讲讲如何写好托福独立写作开头。

如何写好托福独立写作开头

要写背景

在独立写作的背景铺垫中，首先我们需要明晰独立写作常考的15个topic，其中包括education，technology，sports等。在审题、理解题意之后，可以适当定位关键词进行文题分析和头脑风暴，进行社会背景定位。

如托福独立写作真题：Which is more important in one's career life? The working knowledge and skills or the ability to adapt to new conditions.我们可以定位其核心关键词为 career life;working knowledge and skills和adaptability为选择项;可以定位本题所属topic为work，因此可以以“work or career life”作为背景铺垫进行开头段第一句话的写作。

例题：Students in the future can have the choice to learn at home using high-tech innovations, like TV or internet. Do you think they will still attend traditional schools?

开头

We live in a technology world in which technology gives us many opportunities to improve every aspect of our lives. • One of the most obvious impacts which the technology has on education is that it has changed traditional studying-in-class learning pattern.(引入背景) • Now we get the chance to study at home by using technology such as computer or television.(过渡到话题) • This new learning pattern, which I strongly recommend to everyone(明确立场), will save a lot of time spent on the traveling between schools and living spots; moreover, learners can arrange their time schedule flexibly.(transition，过渡)

例题：Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

开头

There are basically two types of classes in universities, classes where teachers lecture and that where the students do some of the talking. Some students prefer the class in which they can talk because they believe the exchange between teachers and students promotes learning; others will prefer lectures which will deliver far more information to students(改写题目). • I prefer the former approach although both teaching and learning approaches are valuable and have relative merits.(明确立场) My reasons are listed below.(transition，过渡)

上述开头方式虽然明确的表达了观点，但是整段读起来会比教啰嗦，因此，下面介绍一种题目重申高级版，结构同样是改写题目➟明确表达立场，但是题目改写会非常简洁奥。

例题：Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.

开头段：As the society developing rapidly, we can hear such voices sometimes in our life that the modern society makes people morbid and people should retrieve their past life.(改写题目) However, as far as I am concerned, the overall modern life has virtually made people more delighted than before.(明确立场)

引入文章主题

一定不要直接抄写原题。结合第一句的背景铺垫，可适当改写题目，引出有争议性的argument。

要有鲜明的立场观点

立场是开头段最为重要且核心的句子，其作用是表明了考生对这一论题的态度，且后面内容的陈述也是建立在这一立场基础上进行论证、分析;立场表明时，尽量用自己的语言进行表述最佳。

使用承接语句

过渡句的作用是承上启下，承接开头段内容的同时，以一种自然流畅的方式简要引出下文，从而加强文章的逻辑关系;也可以适当提及中间段会涉及的论点，进行实际内容的铺垫。建议大家多进行练习和范文积累，一定可以总结出不同的过渡句写作方式。

同学们在平时一定要多注意写作的细节问题，从细节处着手，克服这些错误用法，托福成绩一定会越考越高。如果您想快速复习您就需要有专人指导，唯寻也推出了托福复习班，托福带你轻松上分。

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